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Honestly, voting is the least I could do when writers give up so much of their time to write thoughtful stories. And as for improving it, well I think the plot is fantastic the way it is, just keep up the great work!! And as for language, writing techniques etc... English is actually my third language, so sadly, I wouldn’t know much about those things. 

My pleasure, I enjoyed it quite a lot. I’m sure I’ll like the next chapters just as much! Keep up the good work.