fannymagin

Can you follow back at Davin40 
          
          To, 
          Cynthia
          
          Would you like to speed-run through 'Seth Astill'
          And give your thoughts on first few chapters ^_^
          
          Thanking You, 
          
          
          Your's meschivious,
          Davin (^o^)

abhayas

@fannymagin I read the first few chapters, and I think it's a really good plot. But your punctuation needs improvement. Better than other Wattpad stories I've seen, definitely. Just a few grammatical errors. I would recommend using grammarly. Other than that, it's really good.
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