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Chapter 17-20 out now! Things are getting intense! Let me know what you guys think :)

Just a quick note, don't forget to vote so the book will get more attention. It's more fun taking the journey to The West Sea when you have friends to share it with  :)

Chapters 12-16 now ready for you guys! I hope you enjoy reading it!

So I've getting some suggestions about the each chapter's word count. Because of my excitement to share with you the story of The West Sea, I tend to get 'overly zealous' typing every scene.
          
          So with that in mind I've divided Chapter 3 and will be continuing the following chapters with at the very least around 1000-1500 words (Which will be around 5-6 min of reading time, give or take) so as not to swamp the readers :) Thank you all for your support! Next week's Chapter 12: La Guardia, will be ready soon. Have a nice day!

All of your comments and messages have kept me inspired! Thank you everyone!

"Words can't hurt the deaf." - Arman Bruno, Class 324-Delta

So as suggested, I've started dissecting the paragraphs to give more room for the dialogue parts. Once I was done it was fairly obvious that it is far better than before!

Author here! So what made me write The West Sea? Well, to start off, I've never been a fan of the current state of affairs in my country, let alone have the moral fortitude to voice out my concerns in public. Instead I've been imagining a new, different reality where a country, very much like my own, had defended its territory and made use of its resources. A nation united in support of protecting what was rightfully theirs. As you can see, I imagine a lot of implausible things. But it does make you wonder what it would've felt like to be so optimistically patriotic to a cause so great that it would unite a nation and move forward into the future. Well, it's great to imagine these things, that's why I'm currently writing this novel. Thanks again for the support!