@accioswans - I just finished reading "Every Breath You Take," and I have to say, I was squealing every time something good happened between Billy and Piper! I watched season three a couple of years ago and was really sad about what happened to Billy. Please don’t kill him off!
Overall, I really enjoyed this story, but I think it would be great to include some killer action (not that type of action, if you know what I mean). I can’t wait for the rewritten chapters and the new ones to come out. Take your time—I’ll be cheering you on!