dayxwine

Apasi rindu itu? Kalo kata changbin rasa dilan sih, rindu itu berat,tapi kata Felix, "ya gimana gak berat gue aja lebih gede dari lo dukun! "
          Nahloh?penasaran gak?kalo gak ywd iya:''))hehe kalo senggang baca ya kak thanks ^^
          https://my.w.tt/4xHQenG6tM

aesthetic_meadows

Hi I just wanted to make a comment about your Changlix ff 'Winter.' I want to acknowledge that the plot is really good, and I hope I don't sound rude, but there a lot of grammar mistakes and sentences that don't make sense.. at. all. But if you want, I am willing to re-write it and fix the mistakes you made. I already re-wrote the first chapter and if you are interested, I can share it with you on Google Docs. And don't worry I didn't change the plot at all. I just added a little and fixed your grammar mistakes. So if you are interested in me re-writing your fanfic for you, just message me and I will be more than happy to do so.

YoYo_Jiminie

I already post it...

YoYo_Jiminie

@YoYo_Jiminie its name is bla bla. Just check it
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