I just finished reading up to chapter 2, and though I don’t have much time to read at the moment due to studying for a few very large tests, I do think I will read it in the future. I really enjoy your cast so far and I think your writing of casual conversation seems very natural. The only criticism I have so far is that due to a few formatting issues, it is a little hard to read, though it’s not too big of an issue. Regardless, I really enjoy it so far! Out of curiosity, how long have you been writing it?