@FairozSherif Hey, I liked it. See, I am no writer myself to judge so do not take my words as offensive.
I liked the plot but I think the big paragraphs sometimes feel like a lot to read.
And secondly, as far as I have reached, the supernatural world building is something I wasn't able to get a hang of.
And I think the characters fell for each other too early, like one moment they don't like each other and suddenly in the next chapter their views change which made it seem a bit unrealistic in my opinion (which it should because it's a fictional work ).
