adana2015

You should keep writing though, maybe proofread, edit (if possible) and take your time. 

 There's a lot of grammatical errors and it feels rushed. The first 4 chapters could easily come together and make 1 or even 2 chapters. I like the concept.

hey

read  my new  story plz

read my love story!

i am sorry to delete the story if you guys like it um i am starting a new one please read it.

Hi everyone I have a school assignment to write a story and I want to write that three chapters of the story on wattpad so if you have any opinions about what I should change, plz comment.