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@adawongswhore Hello! Hope you're doing well.
Honestly, about changing, I don't think you should change anything. The writing is great, I love your diverse use of English and some foreign words and your writing style overall, not corny and not cringy and you focus well on details and I love it, especially in Dollhouse (my favorite book). Also, the chapter's length is just fine. Please don't shorten it.
I like all your characters. There aren't many books of the Mafia man X innocent boy troupe, so I am very, very thankful for your books. Everything else is great, and you're doing a good job, I read all your books so far, and the plots are amazing. I trust your brain, and I believe the upcoming chapters will be amazing. Take your time, dear.
Okay, now the relationships.
Etienne and Aleksander, Etienne is really cute and charming and am a sucker for it and Aleksander is hot and domineering and I love them both. Their relationship is like opposites attract and hopefully they both learn from each other, like Etienne learn some confidence even if he's innocent and Aleksander learn to be more lenient, but am honestly curious how it will go, I hope they get together but also it may feel like some Stockholm Syndrome so please make sure Etienne doesn't fall easily even if he's innocent and make sure that mf Alex regret his dumbass greatly. I trust you on that.
Rune and Aedion, I love Rune's sassy and challenging persona, but damn Aedion is really a mess like who hurt you, my man. I love that book. The relationship is just right, like they fit each other in some way, but same, don't make it fall into a Stockholm Syndrome.
Overall, thank you so much for your work and time. You're a gem in Wattpad fr since I like this kind of troupes, so please, in the future, make more. I'll make sure to read every book.
Stay safe, and thanks ♡♡
