Hi addy, plz don't look at my id and judge me but i have read both of your works and i have a little suggestion for you if that's alright.
Its just the stories you write have a good plot and execution its just they are a little to formal. Like even between the conversations of bestfriends or a couple there is a sense of formality which makes it awkward.
I hope you think about this:)
@EMMA_WATSON_20099 Thanks a lot for your suggestion. I am glad you mentioned it to me, and I will keep it in mind for the future. I am always happy to have some constructive feedback from my readers.
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