lilahstarkey

hey addy I have question can I get your honest opinion on my book 

addy_rs86

I am also a newer writer but in my opinion I really like your book it’s  amazing girl, don’t doubt it. I feel like it’s different than other older brother books in a good way. I get the book just started but try and add the other brothers and make sure to go into depth about their character, especially Catalina. Don’t make them seem plain (not saying they are plain) but other than that your book is amazing!! <33
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cloudsandbookss

Honest opinion on my writing ? 

addy_rs86

@cloudsandbookss thank you! Glad I could help. I tend to want to make my characters perfect too so it’s not just you lol.
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cloudsandbookss

@addy_rs86 , thank you so muchhh , I do make them a lil perfect lmaooo, love this tho you’re amazing <3 
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addy_rs86

so I’m also a new writer and I honestly think that your writing is amazing. You make sure to go into the depth of the characters and add little things about them that make the characters much more interesting. I like the way you write all their different povs. But definitely add some cons with each character, (except Matias obvi) they need to seem more realistic especially after everything they went through.
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