PLEASE READ CAREFULLY !!!
You can find my remarks about your story in my profile, but, you should focus on what I mentioned. I can give you a deeper remark if you'll take it seriously.
I've been writing for 3 years, and have tried writing all kinds of novels (I haven’t published yet) and even poetry of all kinds. I've also read books by the world's most famous writers, and another book about different types of readers, their perspectives and preferences, and I've designed a mind map summarising this book.
So, if you have any questions or want to consult me about something, I will help you with all my experience, and if you do not believe what I said, you can ask me anything to make sure that what I said is true, because I was not lying to you, and if you want to become my friend, I will teach you some things that will make you a distinguished writer ♡♡♡
