marlieszn
hi lovely, I took a look at your book and I really liked it! Your writing is very good considering it’s your first time so there’s nothing I would change about that. A preference of mine would be just to make the chapters a bit longer maybe, but I know some people prefer the short ones so that’s completely up to you. But apart from that I think it’s very good ! <3
adestephrn13
AHHH thank you!!! i just uploaded a chapter and made it a lot longer than my other ones so hopefully it’s still good
