Hey Writer!
Okay I MUST say that your story: Unlikely love is absolutely stunning. The elegance and romance added by mere words put on a greater impact on the storyline.
Keep writing and one day tell that one person about how successful he has made you.
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Effort: adiax
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Plus lemme suggest you something to make the book a little more spicy 'n' exciting...
Bring up a cousin, who falls for Sky. She probably starts living with Arie and after an year or two when Dave is back, that cousin falls for him.
'Cousin' thinks she likes him back because most of the time he's looking at her(that's what she thinks) but the reality is that he adores Arie and simply ignores her heads over heels cousin. But love is blind isn't it;)
