aditisinghal21

Two hearts, two kingdoms, one fragile alliance. When a princess and a commander fall in love, desire dares to defy duty—will their passion unite their realms or ignite their ruin?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385611790

Can you please give my story a try and provide your suggestions
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387453461?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=roohiiiiiii