adorkable2012

@dameprincesse I'm in the US. I've been baptized since '05, but I haven't been very active until just a couple of years ago. I'm working towards pioneering, and I'm learning Spanish to expand my ministry.
          	Great convention, wasn't it? wow! The end is REALLY close; that convention was SO intense!
          	WBU? Are you baptized?

Words21

Hey Kristin, I just finished reading "Have you ever" and I think I know y u haven't been getting many votes.The structure of your poems is all wrong. The 1st six line start off well, but the next 20 lines break off into 3 or 4 different poetry types, not to mention the fact that lines tended to break off in odd places. Check out this link http://www.wattpad.com/940172-from-the-outside-in
          Although poetry doesn' have to rhyme it does tend to make it easier for the reader to follow. Other examples would be the book of psalms. Although psalms are typically songs, imagine them as poetry put to music.

SunChangesLives

Hi- Loving all your stuff- it really is awesome. 
          
          I’d appreciate it if you could read my story- The Night I waited for- and my poems. 
          
          The Night I Waited For is about Becky, a sixteen year old, who goes through hell at the hands of a boy, and ends up best friends with her hero. Becky wants something more, and always has done from her hero Eric. So as their prom starts, and Eric reveals he has had a surprising revelation with his girlfriend, Becky can see a way to repay his favours to her. 
          
          Its still very much a work in progress.
          
          Thanks

Freakx3

Hello, just passing through, I was wondering if you'd read my new story called: 
          Being a bodyguard of a hollywood jerk! 
          Here's what it's about (as if the title wasn't obvious enough >.<) 
          
          When you get assigned to be the bodyguard of one of the hottest, new moviestars in Hollywood, you would think any girl would scream in excitement, but not Cera Joyce. She sees right through his glamorous facade to the gets-all-he-wants whiny brat he really is. The journey Cera Joyce is about to embark on won't be easy, especially with Richard's spoiled demands, obnoxious attitude, and cocky demeanor hindering her ability to perform her job, but she faces every obstacle head on, regardless of the hoops she must jump through. Somewhere along the way though, Cera Joyce will realize things are not always what they appear to be and will have to face her biggest challenge yet! Read about it from Purplemiley0! :D 
          
          I'll apriciate all feedback and comments :] 
          
          ~Purplemiley0