Kristin

Hey Kristin, I just finished reading "Have you ever" and I think I know y u haven't been getting many votes.The structure of your poems is all wrong. The 1st six line start off well, but the next 20 lines break off into 3 or 4 different poetry types, not to mention the fact that lines tended to break off in odd places. Check out this link http://www.wattpad.com/940172-from-the-outside-in
          Although poetry doesn' have to rhyme it does tend to make it easier for the reader to follow. Other examples would be the book of psalms. Although psalms are typically songs, imagine them as poetry put to music.  
          

@adorkable2012 Hi!! I'm in the Philippines. No, I'm not baptize yet,but my  parents were both baptized and we are studying the book "Keep Yourselves In God's Love". I  would like to study Spanish too and French also...Thanks...

@dameprincesse I'm in the US. I've been baptized since '05, but I haven't been very active until just a couple of years ago. I'm working towards pioneering, and I'm learning Spanish to expand my ministry.
          Great convention, wasn't it? wow! The end is REALLY close; that convention was SO intense!
          WBU? Are you baptized?
          

hello... i'm also one of Jehovah's Witnesses... and we just had our District convention with the theme of STAY CLOSE TO JEHOVAH.. and i'm wondering what country are you from and are you baptized  already? Thanks!!!

Hey there fellow Wattpad-er ((: 
          
          I was wondering if you can read my new story, 
          ‘If love is the answer, could you rephrase the question?’ 
          OR, ' Let me get this straight…I’m arranged to marry HIM? ' 
          ;; 
          i Knoww these advertising messages get really annoying sometimes but i figured 
          it was the only way to get my stories out there, ya know ;) 
          
          Pretty please with a.....strawberry on top? <333 
          Thank you so much for taking the time to read my message :D 
          
          -Yayi123
          

Hi I'm Will,
          I'd really appreciate it if you could read some of my poems. - just follow the link. I'll be sure to read some of your poems too.

Hello!
          
          I'm just wondering if you could check out any of my works and criticize it so I will know which aspect of writing I need to improve. I hope I'm not bothering you.
          Thank you
          
          --unica

Hello!
          
          I'm just wondering if you could check out any of my works and criticize it so I will know which aspect of writing I need to improve. I hope I'm not bothering you.
          Thank you
          
          --unica

hello, i wanted to just spread the word that i already posted the first chap of my new story. check it out? if not im cool with that.
          ty.

Hi my sweet fan!!! You are awesome!!! I need a favor from you... can you please read-coment-vote my new story I TRADE MY BOYFRYEND FOR A PUPPY! is forthe watty awards!!! and I really need your help!!! please!!! KaTiTa