adrianallensworth

Hello :D Thanks for fanning! Greatly appreciated!
          ~*~*~Melissa~*~*~

thanks so much for fanning!hope you enjoy my story

I don't think Zander's all that intresting. Make it a name you would hear in class so when the character( I'm assuming is a supernatural creature) dose something, you relized, oh crap, he/she isn't normal!

Everybody I needs options for names in my book

hey yall read my new chapter and tell me what u think and just remember i love critism so give me your honest opion

Did you find any things that I need to fix? Or do you have any suggestions?

Hey, fellow brother in writing! Good start. But add correct puctuation and spelling. Also, proof read what you write and draw out key scenes such as the part with the angel Gabrial. I like the idea, but include the heros parents be they human or not. Also, if you want to do a cross over, you (and only you) have permission to use my characters. 
          
          Keep writing-
          Christopher Wells