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PRESENT:
          Dara and Noel reconnect again (which we did, in secondary school) They had forgotten who they were to each other and they become the best of friends (In the story I changed it slightly, but that is how it was supposed to go). Noel has inadvertently turned cold because of being separated from Dara once before and they start to get jealous of the people they are with etc..
           The dad finds out who Dara is and realises that now she is way richer than the past . I knows  they have been speaking and reveals how he separated them once before, even with this knowledge, Noel leaves Dare for Renee
          The Future:
          That is why it is called "our story untold", me and Noel still speak, he is currently living in another country and is planning to study in America. I am in Britain and I am currently in a long term relationship for a year, eight months and counting. I dont know where this story will go next, I was planning to leave it on a cliff hanger...

Regarding "our story untold"
          Thank you soo much to all you guys that have read this book when it was first published, 4 years ago (omg such a long time, I know I know please don't kill me :'( ) . I feel I owe you guys an apology, I have decided to leave this book incomplete. This short story was really for myself, I was 14, going through my first (and only so far) break up and I wanted to put my feelings on paper, therefore I made the story. Even though I am not going to finish it, for all those that read, I want you to know what would have happened or how the book was supposed to go.
          
          
          So Noel was my boyfriend when I was 14, he is the rich, mysterious, daring guy in the story. Dara is me (That is not my real name, in fact all the characters chosen names have some significance to me but is not their real name) , Renee is essentially who Noel left me for. 
          --- Quick side note, I am nothing like the girl 4 years ago, looking at my bio makes me CRINGE which is why I love wattpad, though it is for the public to read, it is really for me to log my life and look back on my experiences every so now and then. I have NO emotional connection to this story any more but it is for those who are interested
          
          Okay, back to the plot... the book was supposed to broken into 3 parts, THE PAST:  I've known Noel since we were 6 and in the story, we were supposed to be separated as his dad did not want me and him to be together because of the disparity in financial status. It was supposed to recall all the good times we had, he protected me in the playground, the only one that really talked to me until one day he moved schools...

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@kmbrown75 thanks I appreciate it :)

i'll check it out @adventous 

Dont forget to read, just wrote a new chapter anxious to here what you guys think

oh cool...thanks :)

@adventous Lol, well...if u have any questions, u can ask me..I'll do my best to help u ^^

@Abeera16 :) thanks im still figuring out how to use these thing >.<

Welcome 2 WP!