a_username_lils
Just started reading, it's great！ I don't have much to say aside from the fact that one of the chapters doesn't have any paragraphs? Also, is there going to be any, idk, magic in it? 'cause the title has 'element' in it so I was just wondering. Anyway, keep it up! :)
adventuregai
@a_username_lils Thank you for the feedback. There will be magic in it, and will start showing up more in the next few chapters. Going for a slower burn here, without the quick gratification I'll look into the formatting a bit more. I ended up uploading some chapters on my phone and it likely didn't copy over well.