Hi! I just wanted to say that you're an amazing writer and I love your story! The beginning is already great, I can tell.
Also, I'm new to writing and I had just made a new story and I was wondering if you could check it out sometime. (Resistance) It's just that your opinion would mean a lot to me, since you're awesome haha. But yeah if you don't, I totally understand it! :)
Anyway, thanks for your time
-chubbypandaz