aeiryhmoon

Hello! To anyone who has read my book, FROSTBITE, I have edited the entire story. If anyone can and would like to, I kindly ask if you could re-read the entirety of it and tell me your input. There aren’t any crazy changes, I have simply just fixed up my writing and made a few changes.
          	
          	I would like to point out that I did remove Sanemi from the training chapter. Don’t worry, he’ll come back! He’ll get a chunk in the story separately, I’ll make sure he’s worth the wait. I just thought he didn’t feel right there.
          	
          	P.S. Giyu is going to have a crazy slow burn.
          	
          	- Hugs & Kisses
          	

Dianya14

@aeiryhmoon your welcome author ^^
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aeiryhmoon

@Dianya14 Of course! ^^ Thank you for giving me input. <3
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Dianya14

@aeiryhmoon wow thank you for the follow author! ^^
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iHeartryuseisato

Giggles... heh.. so im only on chapter 5 :( and I lowk forgot the old version because you took so long grrr... but I can 100% see the difference and I do remember the old sane-oba interaction and I would fight anybody who said the old version was better, because the newer version is 1000% better. I didnt want to point it out but maybe you noticed it too.. the part where sanemi and y/n argued made me cringe in a way??? But its hard to describe but I like how you made it short and simple because we ALL know giyu would not spend more than 30 seconds talking to them..

iHeartryuseisato

@iHeartryuseisato ofc! No cuz I didnt wanna be rude and outright say "this is cringey" but then again a lot of stories I have read were corny and cheesy but this writing style you have it more mature FOR SURE. I also like how giyu is more realistic because we all know giyu would not "blush" or fall within 5 minutes of reading his part... but your doing great! It's so relatable too because I deleted so many stories because I could NOT continue with a whole different style knowing the last chapter was corny pick up lines and outright simping 
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aeiryhmoon

Yess!! Thank you for pointing out the sane-oba part. It was so cringe, all the more… MY ENTIRE WRITING WAS REALLY CRINGE. Still iffy about it right now, but it’s still better. I couldn’t keep writing chapters knowing the ones before are so bad, so I just had to dedicate myself to editing everything. AND, I didn’t write in character at all. I’m writing Giyu better, Rengoku better, EVERYONE. Better. Thank you!!!
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iHeartryuseisato

@iHeartryuseisato the old part btw- when they argued. Not the new part ❤️❤️❤️
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aeiryhmoon

Hello! To anyone who has read my book, FROSTBITE, I have edited the entire story. If anyone can and would like to, I kindly ask if you could re-read the entirety of it and tell me your input. There aren’t any crazy changes, I have simply just fixed up my writing and made a few changes.
          
          I would like to point out that I did remove Sanemi from the training chapter. Don’t worry, he’ll come back! He’ll get a chunk in the story separately, I’ll make sure he’s worth the wait. I just thought he didn’t feel right there.
          
          P.S. Giyu is going to have a crazy slow burn.
          
          - Hugs & Kisses
          

Dianya14

@aeiryhmoon your welcome author ^^
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aeiryhmoon

@Dianya14 Of course! ^^ Thank you for giving me input. <3
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Dianya14

@aeiryhmoon wow thank you for the follow author! ^^
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aeiryhmoon

Will be updating frostbite soon! Demon slayer movie is coming out this weekend for me, I’m super excited :)) I hope you’re all doing well <33

YellowishAdmirer

@aeiryhmoon YOU WILL!? OMG I ACTUALLY HAVE SOMETHING TO LOOK FORWARD TO IN LIFE!!! 
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idontlikeyall_

incredible news for the unemployed 
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