Mystic_Glow
COME BACK BBY WE MISS YOU
aeiryhmoon
iHeartryuseisato
Giggles... heh.. so im only on chapter 5 :( and I lowk forgot the old version because you took so long grrr... but I can 100% see the difference and I do remember the old sane-oba interaction and I would fight anybody who said the old version was better, because the newer version is 1000% better. I didnt want to point it out but maybe you noticed it too.. the part where sanemi and y/n argued made me cringe in a way??? But its hard to describe but I like how you made it short and simple because we ALL know giyu would not spend more than 30 seconds talking to them..
iHeartryuseisato
@iHeartryuseisato ofc! No cuz I didnt wanna be rude and outright say "this is cringey" but then again a lot of stories I have read were corny and cheesy but this writing style you have it more mature FOR SURE. I also like how giyu is more realistic because we all know giyu would not "blush" or fall within 5 minutes of reading his part... but your doing great! It's so relatable too because I deleted so many stories because I could NOT continue with a whole different style knowing the last chapter was corny pick up lines and outright simping
aeiryhmoon
Yess!! Thank you for pointing out the sane-oba part. It was so cringe, all the more… MY ENTIRE WRITING WAS REALLY CRINGE. Still iffy about it right now, but it’s still better. I couldn’t keep writing chapters knowing the ones before are so bad, so I just had to dedicate myself to editing everything. AND, I didn’t write in character at all. I’m writing Giyu better, Rengoku better, EVERYONE. Better. Thank you!!!
aeiryhmoon
Hello! To anyone who has read my book, FROSTBITE, I have edited the entire story. If anyone can and would like to, I kindly ask if you could re-read the entirety of it and tell me your input. There aren’t any crazy changes, I have simply just fixed up my writing and made a few changes.
I would like to point out that I did remove Sanemi from the training chapter. Don’t worry, he’ll come back! He’ll get a chunk in the story separately, I’ll make sure he’s worth the wait. I just thought he didn’t feel right there.
P.S. Giyu is going to have a crazy slow burn.
- Hugs & Kisses
Amira21078
Hi luv ur demon slayer book can't wait for more not rushing you<333
aeiryhmoon
yall have no idea what im ab to drop for the next chapter. hold onto your horses.
aeiryhmoon
You guys are getting fed..
aeiryhmoon
Will be updating frostbite soon! Demon slayer movie is coming out this weekend for me, I’m super excited :)) I hope you’re all doing well <33
FireflowerLeco
Hope your doing alright, I'm a new reader of yours. I can't wait to see what happens next in frostbite, hope to see you soon! -leco
idontlikeyall_
boi get off my screen boi -_- goonette final boss
aeiryhmoon
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im so fucking cooked