Heya! So, it's been literally WAY too long since I've gotten to writing anything, and part of that reason is because I received some very helpful feedback that made me look over my stories and want to make them better than they are. So my book, "The Princess and the Servant" is undergoing a major rewrite, mainly because the character of Shana is changing into a much stronger, deeper, and hopefully more interesting character. Please do check out my rewrite of the first chapter of The Princess and the Servant and let me know your opinions of it. Is it better or worse, in your opinion? How do you think the story will change in light of her new character? The next chapter will be out next week, so don't miss it!