agentmirv
Sorry if I end up spamming notifications from revisions. I'm still learning how all this works, thanks!
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BG_Davies
I hope you enjoy my story. If you do, you may also like my novel, Nika, which is brand new. I would love to hear your thoughts. Cheers, -BG
BG_Davies
@agentmirv Thank you! Margaret Atwood's book centres on Stan and his wife. It is worth reading. Cheers.
agentmirv
@BG_Davies Hi, I read and enjoyed your story! I like Conor and Stan's brother relationship. They're argumentative and follow different paths, but it is clear they care about each other. Their relationship rings true in the story. I like to imagine what Stan's view of Conor is and what Stan was doing before the bar (is he preparing himself for Conor's shenanigans). Thanks, and keep it up!