Since this app wants to put everything I do on on blast, interacting with stories has been wholly unappealing.
I really really like the entire story. I wanted you to know that.
I’ve read too many dark romance stories. Stories that make me question why the hell I chose to continue reading. (Novelty? Controlled exploration? Probably.) I’ve read stories with truly insane scenarios. Dynamics that would literally end very poorly for women in real life.
Like in no reality would a ruthless career mercenary switch up and have a redemption arch and chase the girl like this mf.
I really liked how you played with the idea that she was just as unhinged as he was. When she said lEt mE cArVe mY nAmE oN yOuR BoDy— I just about lost my damn mind…
AND THEN HE SAID: Do you thing—
I lost my shyt.
This was one of a few bits that I’d never encountered before in any story, so BRAVA! That was cool.
I am about to go on a deep mfkn dive on the psychology of why these unhinged dynamics can be appealing, because that is INSANE but also mmmm.
What’s next? Are you continuing on to new stories or retiring?