@agrahamalem
@QueenMorgan2013 I read that & I was all kinds of pissed off! I am appalled that that bastard actually got away with that in real life. It was very well written & I was depressed & angry for a long time. (I have no life, so I live viciously thru others, books & tv..yeah, me!)
Thank you so much for becoming a fan! And you didn't sound abrasive or rude, really. I've had people be rude about it and told me what they hated and didn't give me any suggestions on how to fix it.
Really, your constructive criticism means a ton! :)
-Morgan
@QueenMorgan2013 @QueenMorgan2013 You are welcome. I can hear my sister in the background going; "Sentence structure, grammar, run-on's!" I kind of felt bad and didn't want to come off abrasive or rude and I am sorry if it did sound that way. I did enjoy the story and when I am done with the one I am reading, I am going to read the Victoria pirate story! I love these fictional historical novels, I wish I could write one myself!
Oh AND and I also saw that you added The Queen of York to your library, just to let you know ahead of time, I'm editing it right now so that I fix the bad verb tenses. Just wanted to let you know...It was my first story and not the best. But, wanted to thank you for the feedback from my other story, and for adding both to your library! :)