Hey there! I was wondering if you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s three that I need some criticism on:
"Life Inside White walls" supernatural / romance
At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed?
"Never Meant To Be" romance/ supernatural/ angels/demons/
Cecilia Sophie was meant to marry a man she never met by her forceful parents, but that was the last straw. In the late of night she manages to run away from her home in hope of finding the freedom she longed for. Unfortunately though, that was the day when she realized some things aren’t meant to be.
"Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural
Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two?
It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :)
Thank you,
-Silverlove