marbiethebarbie

The book I'm writing is about a girl named Serena Kings. After her best friend dies, she vows to find out what happened to the sun, because three hundred years ago, it disappeared when the Goddess Alina died. Little does she know, Callum Graves is planning on finding out the truth too. Although they hate the fact, they need each other. Both of them contain the next keys and clues that are needed to find out what happened to the sun. During numerous murder attempts, the two of them unlock the secrets of the past. But, they learn to find out that some secrets are better off with the dead. 
          Please read! I hope you enjoy it as much as I do<33
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/307844632-when-i-die

celestuals

i saw your comments and i’d like to say thanks for realizing what i was trying to do  it’s been years since i wrote the story so i can see why people dislike the character. but hopefully when i get motivation to edit it again i’ll fix it so people stop victim blaming her, thanks again!! i hope you’re enjoying your day :)

celestuals

no problem!! thank you so much! i really do appreciate it :) thank you for your feedback & i hope you enjoy! my writing will surely improve in the meantime
            
            have a lovely day!
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agxcloud

awww thanks for commenting
            i just wanted to say that i really enjoy your story and i thought it was a good portrayal of the topic 
            i really like the way you write and how you make the subconscious and thoughts a part of the story
            i’m definitely going to check out some of your other stories
            i hope you have a lovely day :)
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