ahmadmesslmani

"Sally" new story on its way :$

SallyNutcracker5

I loved it! Even though I think Dolly was stupid and John and ahole it was a good story. Spelling is a must and it would have been even more better if you had made conversations a bit longer. The story was very good!  Always check your spelling and don't write like your telling me a story front face. Make it more like your reading a book :) please keep making more! I will be sure to read them too. Ttyl :?)

ahmadmesslmani

@YaniraAndreu aw thank your so much for your notes i will 
            and than u for votes and reading my story :)
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