ailitta_kuravek

Urg... First of all I am writing so slow :( And now my laptop failed on me, it gave me a crashrapport and just tells me to reboot the system (which I did) and it changes nothing :'( gonna try it again tomorrow otherwise I will have to wait for my next computer

ailitta_kuravek

Urg... First of all I am writing so slow :( And now my laptop failed on me, it gave me a crashrapport and just tells me to reboot the system (which I did) and it changes nothing :'( gonna try it again tomorrow otherwise I will have to wait for my next computer

4fourseasonsyet

I like where you're going with this story and your storyline is good but and this a good criticism too many grammatical errors. It seems before you competely finish with one line of thought you are on your way to another. it's like thinking faster than you're writing. I do that a lot. Go back and read your work ever so often, then proceed. Great storyline.

ailitta_kuravek

It's a bit rainy, where in Asia are you from, if I can ask, tganks for following me btw

chinita1317

@ailitta_kuravek  yes! so I assume you are very imaginative and creative in your writings cause fantasy writer are. :)
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ailitta_kuravek

@chinita1317  it is, i like to get lost in the worlds created by others
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chinita1317

@ailitta_kuravek  I agree with you! Fantasy is way better than reality. You can create impossible things to possible. lol :)
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