Ok Soooo, I have idea for The Veil Between. For the party scene, after Talia almost got into a fight with that blonde girl. I want Talia and Bellamy to FINALLY BANG (again)!! I was watching Sinners and I want Talia to act like Mary when told Stack in the juke joint saying "You can rob banks and trains but you can't steal this p****y for a night". I WANT TALIA TO SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT BELLAMY!!!! Cause I know Bellamy gonna TAKE HER DOWN!!!!! P.s love the story BTW, can't wait for the new chapters!!!