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Here is the new book check out it ❤️ let me know how is it... 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/379979123

Hello I know you guys are waiting for updates especially home less heart and seriously am working on it... Just wanna what you guys are expecting in next update let me know... 

Hey everyone! I’m currently experiencing a bit of writer’s block and could really use your help. If you have any ideas, prompts, or themes you'd like to see explored, in both stories 1 : homeless heart  2: Blended family,please share them with me! Your suggestions might just be the spark I need to get back into the flow. Thanks in advance for your creativity and support!

Hey,
          If you don't mind as a reader I wanna give some suggestions I really hope you won't mind it. 
          Can you please not bold the dialogues and everything like you are writing in "Vami:...." type structure than you can only bold the name though it is also not necessary ig. Use italics where required because bold sometimes irritate.
          Secondly can you please try to have proper punctuations like sometimes it confuses us that where the scene description ends and the dialogue begins again. Like if someone is saying something then he wiped his tears and continued then it should be distinguished where his actions end and dialogues resumed. Inverted commas and colon or commas might work.
          Thirdly, though these things will change the whole appearance of your story but still sometimes grammatical mistakes get a little bit over bearing like ik you are new and english i not your first language so it's pretty normal but from improvement pov you can use chatgpt like copy each para pasting it there and ask if it is grammatically right. GPT will correct all your grammatical and punctuation errors.
          U know your story is doing completely fine without doing any change but I lowkey feel you have a really good plot better than many repetitive ones but still you aren't getting that much recognition and appreciations. Tbh sometimes these errors pisses me a lot but I never left the story because the plot is actually very engaging and the way you describe is perfect but some things work as a turn off.
          The reason I sneaked here instead of saying it there is because I feel maybe you'll not like it there. I have nothing but pure intentions honestly, I hope you don't mind it:)

Hi do check our my story too as its an babar azam story but in a different light if you like it do vote and comment on it thanks 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373252349?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=BilliKiDost

Girly just posted another one. Hit the follow button, vote and comment. Requests are open too

Update plss 

Why do I feel rohit sharma ne yesterday night watched khada hu aj bhi wahi reels and smashed aussies today

Captain Rohit. Batter Rohit. 
          Some matches mean a lot more than the others. This one vs Australia was one of those games....
          
          Well played boys...2 more to go down 

Hey..!!
          The next chapter is updated..!
          Check out and share your thoughts<33
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/366216951?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Rohirat4518