Kimoralloll
Hii! I know you don't know me but I love your new book and the idea, it is hard to read a little since all the sentences are together :)
but throughout the first chapter, it was really good! You have so much talent and I'm proud of you for starting your first book,
Remember, to take your time when writing it can be stressful but you're doing good :) can't wait to see how the book ends.