akansha_the_reader

@Ayesha_Maegan ahhh soz I meant to say thats cool. The weather of here is boiling though! D:

@akansha_the_reader aha thats c

@akansha_the_reader WA

@akansha_the_reader errmehgerrd me too!
          o.O What state? And your welcome, anytime lovely. Xoxo

@Ayesha_Maegan thanks for the advice, Really helped!
          Haha. Don't worry I don't think your a stalker. I live in Australia. 

Heyyyyyy there! :D
          So here I am just like you requested, and may I just say...
          YOU MISSY MOO ARE AN INCREDIBLY TALENTED WRITER. Grammar and punctuation is great, and the plot line is quite intriguing...
          I must point out however the story is a teensy weensy bit rushed, and my advice would be to slow it down a little. Im not sure vampires would admit to being a vampire within a matter of days, but hey, its your story and its fiction, so no biggie! 
          Keep writing and never give up!
          In peace and out,
          - Ayesha xoxoxo
          Ps. Not being a stalker or anything... But what country are you in? You dont have to answer if yo dont wanna. #justcurious