mysterious_jennie

Hey I like your book naughty baby,  but it's difficult to read and follow the story because there are no punctuation to show the difference between conversations and author narration , I would just like to let you know that , but so far the book is good , it's just hard to understand the flow of conversations 

mysterious_jennie

@mysterious_jennie the story is good so far , keep going and making improvements,  I know writing a book is not always easy 
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akihsin1608

Sorry i will try to work with it
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