Nir

Hi I'm wondering if you could read my story, The Gangster's Twin Sister. The genre of my story is action with a little bit of teen fiction. 
          
          Here's the Prologue:
          
          Paano nga ba masasabing tapos na ang laban?
          
          
          Paano kung ang inaakalang tapos ay nagsisimula pa lang?
          
          
          Ang masaklap na nakaraan pala ay makakaapekto sa kasalukuyan.
          
          
          All of the weapons are pointed to the Maximiliens's one and only princess, Light Maximilien.
          
          
          But why is it her? Why is it on the gangster's twin sister.
          
          Kung magustuhan niyo po feel free to vote for it and you can also comment. Thanks, I hope you can read it. 
          
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Hi there.. I have just published my story but nobody's reading it, but myself. I'm so depressed. I totally lack feedbacks. Nobody really reads my stories at home. If you don't mind, would you like to check it out, please. Even just some glances and good criticism would do. Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/8G8W5TwYNV
          
          I hope you would like it and provide a new, good taste to you.
          I'll be grateful to you.
          Thank you.

How I hate your bio, Nir. Damn you, spotlight thief!