alainajane

mymy im starting to write my own story....

sweetfocc

@alainajane oh my gosh! I so like your stories and by that, you deserve to be followed also.Thanks
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alainajane

im enjoying searching for new and cute story expect me to comment from the author's work of imagination.... 
          dont make your story to be too long sometimes it make the readers boredome or make an interested plot and twist te be more excited...

alainajane

now i already finished reading the prince.... i forgot, the campus royalty it was good at nkakakilig din,11 ways to forget your ex....and so on i like to ask bakit ata sa mga kwento nyo "15 yrs old" nagsisismula nang magsilandi yung mga character at yung describing nila about love i cant believed that at age 15 they actually feel the sudden urge of love towards their classmate san nyo b pinagkukuha yung ganung idea of love at very young age .... well it was just a call for some pro or nonpro or student to write better and more meaningful story here it was free to everyone....

alainajane

hi im just new here i already read some tagalog stories one of them was "shes dating with the gangster" it was nice but it was tragic that the author doesn't seem to know how to make a good plot and doesn't know the good cycle of the story it was ups N down and i would like to comment about the main character, does the author don't know that the reader can be confused of how negative thinker the girl in the story ..well i think if you would give it a publishing company it would rejected and one more thing how could the author think that the main characterr in the story would be meet in "whatever called it after life if the girl die naturally and the boy kill himself it was pathetic . wag nyo gawing tanga ang  mga readers nyo....