Hi there... Would you like to check out my story? I kinda need some feedbacks in order to improve myself. Even some criticism would do. Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/OV1yMHRuUV
Hope you'll like it.
Thank you.
(pt 2) i tried really hard to enjoy myself but everywhere i went people were voring each other. the gift shop, the spa, the mexican restaurant run by white people (???), there was vore everywhere. luckily i avoided getting vored because i told them i was a minor.
i had a dream that i went to stay at a hotel. little did i know this hotel was right next to a convention center in which they were holding the annual vore con. you know where this is going.