aleceah0641 (@aleceah0641)'s conversations

urfavtal

Nov 03

So your story is great so far just when I was scrolling it felt like there a lot of writing and for people that have a short attention span (like me) it can take them a lot of effort to try and read it or they might just not read it as all.

urfavtal

@urfavtal Yeah ofcourse I mean you don't necessarily need to take away things I would just separate them with like a dash in between or make some things bold

Nov 03 • Reply

aleceah0641

Thank you so much, so your saying I need to take away some stuff

Nov 03 • Reply

pranavitiwari

Oct 26

Hey!
          Hope you are doing well. Apologies for unexpected bragging. Are you interested in reading? If so, check out my book "Love Letters Unanswered".
          Your reads, votes, and comments make a huge difference❤"
          Thank you for your time  
          
          Have a nice day!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373795807-love-letters-unanswered