xhellomynameisx
Thanks for following me back
NesrinaAhmed
Hello!
Hope I'm not bothering you ♡
Can you please check out my story Love Circle and tell me your opinion?
Hope you like it ♡
Have a great day ♡
NesrinaAhmed
@NesrinaAhmed thanks so much for your feedback and yeah, I'll edit it after completing it ^-^ and I understand, I'll try to add more description ♡ thanks a lot ♡♡
alexandra4560
Your book has great potential and I like the plot a lot. It needs some editing done. I think there needs to be some character development because the story jumps into situations without very much explanation. Like after the party chapter the main character says she likes not just Taylors looks and personality, but their conversation didn't reveal any of that. The audience doesn't know Taylor well, so it's hard to make a judgement and agree with her.
But your still a great writer! And your story is great!!! Plus I'm no professional editor soooooo.... :)
shadyy-
Hey Alexandra if you have time, would you be able to check out my book? And if you sincerely like it, vote and comment? ❤️
JesusLover001
@alexandra4560 Hey! Could you possibly read my book ALEANA? It would mean the world to me if you could. Thank you ❤
Aafrynn
Hey Alexandra :)
Can you check my romantic book "If only it was an illusion"
Itll mean a lot :)
I love your name
raghdanezzat
Hi Alexandra would you mind checking out my romance book BLUES?
Inkquill1234
Thankyou so much for the reads and votes, I hope you are enjoying the book so far:) <3
alexandra4560
lol I just saw that I put can't-- *meant can*
alexandra4560
No problem! I can't tell your book is going to great!!