alexandralim

by the way, to write this chapter I had to skim through Crime and Punishment again. just to let you know, I hate Raskolnikov

I've been rewriting Theo's scene in the new chapter for 1000 times already 

Heyyyyy if it’s not too much trouble I started writing a book (idk know if it’s good and it’s not a fanfic) Ita called the Outlaws and it’s not on my account it’s on a different one. You’ll see it if you go to my reading list. Anyways, I was wondering if maybe you could give me a shout out or something??? The more readers I get the more tips on writing I’ll have an I wann know if I have actual talent. Xoxo❤️

OMG thank you so much for 2k reads!!! i'm beyond grateful. you guys are the best

Bsr 
          Merci pour ton abonnement à mon compte et j'espère que les histoires que je lis te plaisent également ❤️❤️❤️
          MERCI DU SOUTIEN

NEW CHAPTER IS OUT!!! And it’s sooooomeeeethiiiiing!!!!!!

Small but important changes
          In my previous post, I told you about the new chapter structure. Now — about what exactly has changed inside the text.
          ⚠️ The story is still the same. You won't miss anything, even if you don't re-read. But even if you've already read it, I really ask you to go and vote on the new chapters.
          But if you're curious about the details — here they are:
          
          1. Chapter formatting
          The chapter images and epigraphs have been changed.
          
          2. Message formatting
          The characters' phone conversations now look like images that imitate a messenger app.
          
          3. Minor stylistic edits
          I changed the word order here and there, removed redundant synonyms, and trimmed a bit for pacing.
          
          4. The book Perfume by Draco
          In the early chapters, I added that Draco is reading Perfume by Patrick Süskind, which Theo STRONGLY recommended to him.
          
          5. Clarified the main characters' perfume scents
          Mattheo — davana, nagarmotha, coffee
          Theo — tobacco, black tea, cedar
          Enzo — tobacco, guaiac wood
          Marvolo — saffron, old whiskey, tree resin
          Prim — Before chapters 20–21, she smelled like spicy honey; after buying new perfume — cherry.

Hi! You've probably just gotten a ton of notifications about new chapters. Don't panic — I've split the existing chapters into sub-chapters for convenience, so reading on your phone will be much easier.
          I've also slightly edited the text and changed the formatting, but you don't need to re-read everything. The story is still the same. I'll tell you about the tiny details I've added in a separate post later.
          A very important request: please go into the new parts and vote!!! 
          How the structure has changed (original chapters → new parts)
          Chapter 1. The Light We Seek
          → Chapter 1. The Light We Seek
          → Chapter 2. Enzo baby
          → Chapter 3. The Matriarch
          → Chapter 4. Goodnight, Trouble
          Chapter 2. A Boys' Agreement
          → Chapter 5. Whose Twin Are You?
          → Chapter 6. Slytherin Gang Again
          → Chapter 7. Woman to Woman, Man to Man
          → Chapter 8. A Boys' Agreement
          Chapter 3. Ripples on the Water
          → Chapter 9. Ripples on the Water
          → Chapter 10. When You're Being Ignored
          → Chapter 11. Caballero's Cologne
          Chapter 4. Breaking Point
          → Chapter 12. When Reality Hits You in the Face
          → Chapter 13. Breaking Point
          → Chapter 14. To the Prettiest Boy in the World
          Chapter 5. What a Slytherin's Word Really Means
          → Chapter 15. What a Gentleman and a Cerberus's Word Really Means
          → Chapter 16. The Art of Provocation
          → Chapter 17. What a Shepherd's Word Really Means
          Chapter 6. Tension
          → Chapter 18. Tension
          → Chapter 19. Is This How Good Girls Feel
          Chapter 7. June: Barcarolle
          → Chapter 20. Tchaikovsky: June: Barcarolle
          → Chapter 21. Debussy: Réverie

hi, thank you for the votes on my book! i hope you enjoy it :) 

have you read the new chapter yet?? what do you think of Matteo?? the next one will be with Enzo!!!