I'm replying to your comment on The Baby Project here, as I don't want to spam that story, haha :-) Also I figured you'd be more likely to see it here.
Yeah, I read a lot. And even more when I was younger. And I think that's a massive help when writing. There's not really any secret to make your writing better other than reading and practicing. The more you write, you will get better at it! I promise. Hope this can be of some help, and good luck if you decide to write a story :-)