alice_daVinci

So.. I am gonna upload Intro of my new story in a week. I haven't completed it yet so I don't know how long it will take.. Just letting you know that your response will be appreciated. I would love to know what impression my story left on you..
          	
          	Don't forget  to tell me weather you like it or not.

Frenny000

Ohhh myyy goddd!!!! Your book ‘interfaith love is a literal gem!!!!! I have been wanting to comment on your chapters but I am so engrossed in the book that it always slipped my mind! The character of the male lead and female lead may look like typical romance book personalities but as you read more, the subtleness of their personalities starts becoming visible. And I loveeeeeeeee itttttttttt. I love the slow burn (I am not a fan of slow burn). I love his perspectives! I love how restrains himself in front of her. I JUST LOVE THEM SO MUCH! Muah muah muah. I also love how realism is maintained that they have to act a certain way in front of others in order to maintain an image but in private he is sooooo …ahhhhhhhhh! Yes no doubt the story needs some language refinement and editing but nonetheless even in raw state it is a story that is responsible for making me stay awake till 5 AM ! So gripping so subtle …. Author jan I pray that you one day publish your book and everyone gets to enjoy this experience that I have enjoyed!

Frenny000

Of course I will! I am obsessed with them… currently still in the first book tho hehe 
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alice_daVinci

@Frenny000 thank you soooooooooo much for trying my book. I never really thought that anyone would love it coz I wrote because I wanted to and didn't believe that others will like my story but your message means a lot to me. Thank you so much.. I would like you to try it's second part with is, "from dusk till dawn". Both our main leads will be there 
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shradhasray

Hello author I hope you are doing well
          I just want to tell you are a fabulous writer I loved your first book it's so good I can't explain in words .Also this story deserves much more love and appreciation ❤️ ,and I believe one day it will be . All the best for your next story 

alice_daVinci

So.. I am gonna upload Intro of my new story in a week. I haven't completed it yet so I don't know how long it will take.. Just letting you know that your response will be appreciated. I would love to know what impression my story left on you..
          
          Don't forget  to tell me weather you like it or not.