alienpajamapants

I’m working on a total rewrite of the broken trilogy… 

JodiJenkinsRegazzini

This was a great story!  One thing I would reword is the movie pieces. The story line didn’t need that!  This was a great stand out piece!  I would broaden that. Instead of Loki dying ( or not dying) as the movie have him perish in a different way but come back later so you have that climax piece.  It is an excellent concept though.