PanWuthAPlann

Ow, thanks so much for all the votes! I know it's not the best right now, but I'm going to fix it, and that just made me feel so good! You totally just got a follow!

alina_alessandra

I totally like the idea of your story, really.  I love the bond between shikara and shikamaru soooo much and I like your writing style ! There are just little mistakes like white haired crazy dude in the Akademie is mizuki not mizuke. But if you fix the little things, you have a pretty good story! 
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CharlyLangXO

Thanks für's hinzufügen (^^)

CharlyLangXO

@ CharlyLangXO  :D :D ich hab mich schon gewundert:D <3
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alina_alessandra

@ CharlyLangXO  *Mega
            Scheiß autokorrektur :/
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alina_alessandra

@ CharlyLangXO  kein Problem die geschichte ist gegangen gut ^^
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