SyerraJaneXoXoX

Hey! If you have any spare time do you think you could give one of my stories a look! If you cant then I completely understand:) 
          Umm the names of my stories are... 
          "Mystery’s of the Night" and "Love Shaken, and Broken" 
          Maybe comment and vote? Constructive criticism is welcomed!
          Thanks! 
          
          <3 Syerra

pop_that_zit101

Hi!!! I’m not new on this site or anything, but I’d really LOVE to make it on the What’s Hot list!! So I was wondering if you could read my story, vote, become a fan, and maybe leave a few comments? Here’s a summary of what it’s about:
          
          For Annabelle, having somebody so completely infatuated with her is beyond weird. When she starts getting weird pictures of her, and gifts left for her in her room, she figures that there are three possible suspects. Her best friend, Josh, who always seems to be there for her, but is always gone the night that weird things happen. Ethan, the boy she hates because of her parents, who knows just enough to even be considered. And then there’s Matt, the cute football player she flirts with at school. When all hell breaks loose, she finds herself accusing everybody, and losing friends in the process, just when she needs them most. She finds herself in such a deep, binding situation, not knowing the truth, and fearing it all at once. But what happens when nobody is there to protect her? And what happens when she finds out the truth, and that it was somebody she never, ever expected?
          
          Thanx! I hope you check it out (:

holahaven

Hey! Would you mind reading my story?
          
          An Unending Journey
          
          summary:
          
          Jonah Cameron and Leila Orrick hve been best friends for two years...but his parents dont approve because she is five years older than him. one day while they are talking Leila surprises him by agreeing with his parents. they're ambushed by strange people. one person bites him and later Jonah is found by a group of vampires. he goes on to live with them. strange things start to happen... Can he handle the change, the cravings, the new him?! 
          
          i dont wanna give too much because im not sure of the path it will take myself! lol 
          
          and i have another story called My Night Prom Night. 
          
          Comment and tell me how you like it! :) xoxo

MzJazzie

Aloha! When you get a moment, could you please read one of my stories?  I will warn you before hand about each of them.
          
          "Sex, Lies and All the Wrong Guys" is exactly what it sounds like.  Jalexxa is dying to be in love, to feel loved, and to love.  Some men she meets are good for her, and some not so much.  This one has sexual material in it.  So beware!  =)
          
          "Memoirs of a Teenage Vampire Queen" is about Vampires.  Christine is a teenage girl, who finds out she is to be the Queen of the Vampire population.  Only mature content in this one is language.  =)
          
          "State of Denial" is about a teenage girl going through very plausible trials.  Debating suicide, being an outcast, feeling fat, a boy friend who has personal issues, and all types of other plausible events.  Again, the only mature content in this one is language.  =]
          
          Please take a look and let me know what you think.  Thank you!  Have a wonderful day!
          
          <3 Jazzie

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls