GhoshXwrites

Hello :)) 
          Hope you are doing well, 
          I'm sorry for posting it here. 
          
          But if you like comedy along with mystery, then you can give a try to my book. 
          It's  
          Maybe in our next life
          
          Tropes
          *Brother's best friend
          *Businessman× lawyer
          *Arranged by fathers with twist
          *Mysterious past.
          Where she fell first and he falls harder. 
          
          
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Drssch

Hey thanks for your vote on COLLATERAL HEARTS looking forward to your review.
          Hope you enjoyed the book!!
          Do let me know my mistakes that I may improve!
          Thanks again.

alizehayaan

@Drssch always,yr❤️
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Drssch

@alizehayaan thank you so much ♥️ for taking time to give me the review. I was really looking for reviews to improve the story. Please do check out other works too. FALCON HEARTS and LETTERS TO MY SOLDIER ❤️ 
            THANKS AGAIN.
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alizehayaan

@Drssch really loved and enjoyed reading ur work.It was totally different from what I read mostly.It was raw,intenseand beautifully packed with emotions.I loved the way u kept every part of this story realistic.
            
            As for improvements, I would say u may have rushed and missed some parts of the story..for instances:-
            
            1.The relation of Sakshi and Sid.Their development of relationship felt bit fast paced.They both are flawed,sensitive and deeply committed to what they love.A true blue slow burn couple.We missed bit here and there- especially their healing phase.
            
            
             2.A pov of Aaliya- her character has a lot of potential for being an anti-heroine.In the this book,her vulnerability, her observations,her thoughts and her budding feelings for sid and their bond - would have brought a new side to the story.
            
            3.The torture period of sid
            
            Other than that I loved ur book,yaar.U did soo well,yaar.Absolutely stanning and cheering for u❤️
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Pixieewrts

Hello! Hope you’re all doing well and life’s treating you kindly.
          
          if you have loved TERI DEEWANI by deewanixwriter then i'm sure you'll love this one as well.
          
           It’s a high school rom-com filled with funny chaos, drama, emotions, and of course, lots of heart-fluttering romance. If you love stories where characters drive you crazy, make you laugh, and keep your curiosity alive, then this might just be your cup of tea! ☕✨
          
          The book is called:
          Tum Hi Tum — [An Exceptional Tale]
          
          Your feedback means the world to me... whether it’s love, suggestions, or constructive criticism, I appreciate it all. After all, we only get better by growing, right?
          
          Here’s the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390913718-
          
          Thank you so much for your time and support... even checking it out means a lot to me!

vedica_dreamscaper

1"Some stories aren’t just about love; they’re about the madness that comes with it. Step into Karan and Saraswati’s world—a place where emotions run wild, and love comes at a dangerous cost. Ready to experience an unforgettable journey?"https://www.wattpad.com/story/377374966?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=vedica_dreamscaper