JiJoomi

Hey! I’ve been working on a story called "Destined Heart"
           (https://www.wattpad.com/story/364329438-destined-heart-fan-fiction-f4), 
          and I’d love for you to check it out.
          
          I'm really looking for readers who don’t just read silently but also engage with the story through comments and feedback. It can be really frustrating to write when it feels like no one is actively interacting—it gets boring, and I start to feel like I'm missing out on connecting with readers who might actually love the story. I’ve found books after years of searching and thought, 'Why didn’t I discover this earlier?' I don't want to miss that for others with my story!
          
          If you do read it, I’d be so grateful for your thoughts and comments! Your feedback means a lot and really helps me grow as a writer.
          
          If it’s not your thing, no worries at all—feel free to ignore or remove this message!
          
          Thanks so much for your support, and happy reading!  
          (https://www.wattpad.com/1428074460-destined-heart-fan-fiction-f4-disclaimer)

allofyougotohell

So, hey. Sorry it took me a lot of time to read you story and give you feedback. I told you a few days and it's took me a few months, sorry. I've been really busy. 
            But anyways I read your story and it's interesting, time traveling into an old drama and living a luxurious life, sounds like a dream. However, in the introduction part I noticed you changed the characters name ( are you Latino? Just want to know) and for some viewers like me it might be confusing so it would be better if you explain it in more details and also your character is supper nice and interesting, but it just needs a bit more dept and character, like maybe an interesting backstory that shows why she is the way she is today or how it shaped her personality or emotional depth, smth like that( sorry, Idk what I'm saying ). But as you know I'm no expert so if you feel like my feedback is offensive or you prefer it the original way, feel free to say it and good luck with your work!!
            And once again sorry that I didn't reply sooner, hope you understand.
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JiJoomi

@allofyougotohell 
            Okay, i will be waiting for you comments and feedback
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allofyougotohell

@JiJoomi Thank you so much for asking me to give feedback on your story, and yes, I would love to. I know how it feels when there is no engaging conversation about your story, and now you just don't know how to improve it. So, sure I'll read it, but give me a few days. My exams are going on right now, so I'll check it out after the exams.
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angelinamartin779

Hey there,
          
          I just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading your story. It completely pulled me in, and I couldn’t help but picture all the scenes playing out in my head. It honestly feels like it would make such an amazing comic!
          
          I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love the opportunity to bring your story to life visually. Just imagine your characters leaping out of dialogue bubbles it could be such an engaging and creative project!
          
          No pressure at all, but if this idea excites you as much as it does me, I’d love to connect. You can find me on Discord at (evelyn_scott.11). I’d be happy to share my portfolio and other socials there too.
          
          Can’t wait to chat and see where this could go!
          
          Best,
          (Evelyn)

angelinamartin779

@allofyougotohell for sure take your time .
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allofyougotohell

@angelinamartin779 Umm, ok, so right now my exams are going on, so I'll catch up to to later after my exams are over.
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angelinamartin779

@allofyougotohell Yes that's the one.
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goldendwan

author when are u going to upload the dazai fic ?

goldendwan

ayyy im a huge fan author-chan . Please keep on writing your amazing fics !!!!
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allofyougotohell

@goldendwan I have nearly finished another chapter, but I thought no one would read it so I didn't upload, but since you were waiting for it, I am really sorry and I will be uploading it within a few hours. 
            
            Thank you for your support!
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