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thanks for following hun!

@Plain-and-Simple you are so very welcome

@Plain-and-Simple your welcome anytime Sargent!  And who would dare work with the unicorns that work with the government! They are traders!!!!

@Plain-and-Simple hi :) and thank you for what

@teddybar I'm glad you helped lol

@allthingslondon123 glad I could help. I believe in you x

@teddybar thank you so much your advice means a lot to me there have been times where I thought about stoping the book but now I really feel I should just finish it and whatever happens, happens 

@allthingslondon123 it's good you have a plot set out! And don't ft encouraged too easily, sometimes it take a little time and patience but you should be fine don't worry sweetness x

@teddybar thank you and I do have a clear plot I just get discouraged with writing it because I feel as if there arnt a lot of people reading it 

@allthingslondon123 no bother x And overall I think it's a good, well-written story but just make sure you have a clear idea in your head of some kind of plot to follow (even if it's really general) so that the story doesn't lose track but I really love it <3