addielinababy
@alocalsoftie I think it needs some editing and search stuff about writing you use "I" Quit often and about remaking it I think read first after writing again and think this paragraph or lines could easily be written in a different way yk. And make edits of character at all. Write every idea you have about the book plot and their personality. Peoples personality depends on what they have gone through Sorry for my bad English and I genuinely wanted to help you if you want any help you can contact me on insta @dmarchquill it's my writing account ❤