aloliindisguise

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.....So I'm alive....Been working on some pet projects so yh, blame that for no uploads. College applications are going nicely I think

I don't think yall have any idea how much brainrot Zenless Zone Zero has given me. No chap in like a month? I'm grinding zenless. No update in a month? I'm downloading mods for zenless to grind and stare at Nicole's tits. I FUCKING LOVE THIS GAME OH MY GOD. anyways new chap (checks day) by saturday the latest (I'm grinding (Gooning) for Zhu Yan btw.)

Gonna post a new chap in a sec but im really realizing that my chaps have ALOT of redundancies in terms of pharagraph structure and the like

OK❗
          
          I need to take a step back and analyze where Toma (Y/n) of my Dragon Ball fic lies and Why he really even exists. I want to tell a story with him but he more or less feels flat to me and Launch as well.
          
          Like, for the most part, she's been nothing but 'his friend/love interest' and idek what he is to her.
          
          She doesn't voice her problems of him, she always takes the most reasonable side, and STINKS of just being wife material for no reason.
          
          CLEARLY THIS IS A PROBLEM
          
          Also need to work on his interactions and relationships with the Z-fighters and non fighters; because, outside from Vegeta, Goku and whoever the fuck, this man does NOT interact with people
          
          Which makes sense given her personality in Z, but in Super.......well, he does go out due to events of the Xicor SAGA so I'd say that's fine but still, yell get my frustration.
          
          
          
          
          Was watching this rather insightful yt vid on HELLUVA BOSS of all shows and found that they made some good points concerning character interactions and relations with things to consider when making a character....a character rather than a self instert and hollow shell.
          
          Because, and here's a problem I KNOW is gonna come.
          
          What does Toma contribute to the plot of Dragon One aside from fighting to prevent the big bad evil?
          
          He doesn't actively seek out the next conflict to drive the plot, said next conflict doesnt start because of him nor his actions. He's LITERALLY a reactionary deutertagonist.
          
          God I have so much love for this man (pause) in my heart but he's so bland and dry right now, it makes sense why I imagine no-one else does

I find it so funny that a pretty important thing that happened happened Z Toma basically began As a funny joke a few months ago

Ik it won't seem like much but another chap is finished, trying to get the up before I have to take a break to study for CXC

Can belive I've already plotted out the U6 exhib arc, one thing I dislike about it was how short it was, barely felt like an arc in the anime tbh

Another day of me not believing I made the setup of  Y/n's semblance in my rwby fic REALLY start with him wanking in the forest. Wtf was I cooking???

HAPPY NEW YEARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS