aloliindisguise

Happy new years yall.
          
          I can't make promises I won't keep but know that I will try to finish a chapter per week. I won't say upload as I do want to build them up in an archive and them subsequently release them with a clear head as to not stagnate but we've seen how that goes with other fics here. I've been practicing discipline and sticking to something whole retaining the original joy I had going into it and belive me Dragon One is a fic that requires a LOT of hindsight to operate which I did lack as I originally wrote this story on a whim.
          
          Through this story I've learned to draw, write, develop new techniques and stories in the background, a love for my Ocs and the various worlds they occupy.
          
          I may not show it but not a day goes by where I don't think about both Dragon One and One of a kind....I love yall and hope the two people that fw this fic of mine can stick with me in the new year alongside the shenanigans this story will branch off into.
          
          Rest in late peace Akira Toriyama and thank you for creating Dragon Ball.
          
          
          No new years story this time, I want to head I to 2025 with a new goal and a clear mind.
          
          -loli out!

Phew false alarm, its just ssj3 with a different design...but still the shorter hair for ssj3 DOES makes sense in universe for Dragon One. I always wanted to give Vegeta ssj3 but I thought he simply didn't want it but BAH who gives a shit......on the plus side now that Daima is Canon Toma will NOT be in that shit as he likely would still be brooding with Launch tackling her own Ark in Z

Not caught up to Daima rn.....did they really just give Vegeta my Perfected SSJ3? HOW THE FUCK AM I GONNA EXPLAIN THAT WHEN I GET TO IT?????

They done put that Senior citizen in that ring bro

's call me the drink

.....So I'm alive....Been working on some pet projects so yh, blame that for no uploads. College applications are going nicely I think

I don't think yall have any idea how much brainrot Zenless Zone Zero has given me. No chap in like a month? I'm grinding zenless. No update in a month? I'm downloading mods for zenless to grind and stare at Nicole's tits. I FUCKING LOVE THIS GAME OH MY GOD. anyways new chap (checks day) by saturday the latest (I'm grinding (Gooning) for Zhu Yan btw.)

Gonna post a new chap in a sec but im really realizing that my chaps have ALOT of redundancies in terms of pharagraph structure and the like

OK❗
          
          I need to take a step back and analyze where Toma (Y/n) of my Dragon Ball fic lies and Why he really even exists. I want to tell a story with him but he more or less feels flat to me and Launch as well.
          
          Like, for the most part, she's been nothing but 'his friend/love interest' and idek what he is to her.
          
          She doesn't voice her problems of him, she always takes the most reasonable side, and STINKS of just being wife material for no reason.
          
          CLEARLY THIS IS A PROBLEM
          
          Also need to work on his interactions and relationships with the Z-fighters and non fighters; because, outside from Vegeta, Goku and whoever the fuck, this man does NOT interact with people
          
          Which makes sense given her personality in Z, but in Super.......well, he does go out due to events of the Xicor SAGA so I'd say that's fine but still, yell get my frustration.
          
          
          
          
          Was watching this rather insightful yt vid on HELLUVA BOSS of all shows and found that they made some good points concerning character interactions and relations with things to consider when making a character....a character rather than a self instert and hollow shell.
          
          Because, and here's a problem I KNOW is gonna come.
          
          What does Toma contribute to the plot of Dragon One aside from fighting to prevent the big bad evil?
          
          He doesn't actively seek out the next conflict to drive the plot, said next conflict doesnt start because of him nor his actions. He's LITERALLY a reactionary deutertagonist.
          
          God I have so much love for this man (pause) in my heart but he's so bland and dry right now, it makes sense why I imagine no-one else does

I find it so funny that a pretty important thing that happened happened Z Toma basically began As a funny joke a few months ago